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Further ways to improve our presentation is through the use of more images. Firstly, for location we need to have a consistent background were the majority of shots will be taken. Issues that occur with a derelict site is trying to find a location that isn't closed off to the public and due to the time of year, the chances are extremely slim for a day with appropriate weather. An additional issue is trying to transport all of our instruments to these remote locations. Furthermore for locations, lighting will be difficult to control in a derelict building as the open windows and gaps in the ceiling allow natural lighting to enter which affects the alternative rock style of dark and gloomy.

Our song choice for our music video, Radioactive, was approved of due to the beats of the music would be relatively easy to reproduce into a music video. 

An issue that may occur from our band members is through the singer. It's unlikely that the strong voice of the singer in the actual song by Imagine Dragons would be replicated effectively by our singer due to his youthful face despite his age. Therefore, test footage will be required to ensure that the singer has the correct characteristics to be a singer to replicate this song. Additionally, in the band members section of the presentation, photos were necessary to provide a feel of what each individual looks like to provide an overall picture of the band.

For costumes, more images were needed to be used to display what current alternative rock bands wear and the exact types of clothing we intend to use for our artists such as a leather jacket or dark jeans.

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